Style and writing guide
Writing about ourselves and our users
How to write about Social Security Scotland and the people who use our services.
- Addressing the user
- Adviser
- Claim and claimant
- Collective nouns
- Dependant
- Social Security Scotland
- We
- Words to use and avoid when talking about disability
- Writing about death
- Writing about our users
Addressing the user
Our users include:
- Social Security Scotland colleagues, like client advisers and case managers
- clients
- client representatives
When addressing the user in content, use ‘you’.
For more information, see the GOV.UK style guide entry on ‘Addressing the user’.
Claim and claimant
Do not use claim or claimant. Use application or applicant, then client once the award decision has been made.
For full guidance, follow our entries on:
Collective nouns
Collective nouns like family, government or team take a singular verb or pronoun when they’re thought of as a single unit.
When they’re thought of as a collection of individuals, use the plural forms.
Examples
- The team has worked hard to deliver its policies
- The team are all looking forward to their holidays
- Social Security Scotland is an Executive Agency of the Scottish Government
Dependant
A person reliant on another (usually financially). For example, a person’s child or an adult who relies on a person financially.
Use 'dependant' for the noun (British English version), not the American English version 'dependent'.
Social Security Scotland
Use ‘we’ or ‘us’ when referring to Social Security Scotland, except in MyGov content.
For MyGov content use ‘Social Security Scotland’.
Social Security Scotland should be referred to as a singular entity: “Social Security Scotland is…” rather than “Social Security Scotland are…”
Never abbreviate to ‘SSS’ or refer to ‘agency’.
We
Use ‘we’ or ‘us’ when referring to Social Security Scotland, except in MyGov content.
MyGov
For MyGov content, use ‘Social Security Scotland’, as ‘we’ on MyGov refers to the 'Scottish Government'.
Words to use and avoid when talking about disability
Follow the GOV.UK entry on ‘words to use and avoid when talking about disability’.
Writing about death
Be direct wherever possible. Say ‘death’ instead of ‘loss’ and ‘died’ instead of 'passed away'.
Research shows that brief, plain language is more helpful than content added to make something sound more sympathetic. People would rather quickly understand what they need to do than read through lengthy condolences. (From ‘Designing content for people dealing with a death’).
Writing about our users
Do not use claimant or customer.
Use:
- applicant (before award)
- client (after award)
- individual
- child (if under 16)
- young person (if 16 and older)
If someone gets a benefit on behalf of someone else, make it clear what terms you're using and who you mean by each.
For example, a parent getting Child Disability Payment for their child.
Example in letters
[child’s] award for…
Example in operational guidance
For the purposes of this guidance, we will refer to the parent, guardian or representative of the child as 'the client' and the child as 'the child'.